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Tuesday 3 November 2015

Random writing

It looks like a big bush with a bath inside and a shelf filled  of bottles with lights around it.
   Outside it cold wet and wind  It also has a bush that i covering the bath and the shelf with leaves around it  inside its warm and tostey  it makes you fell warm inside. 
Who doesn't dream of bathing outdoors? But it's also nice to have a nook for privacy.:

1 comment:

  1. Hey Anna,
    Your writing is really good i like the way you used capital letters and full stops. Maybe next time you could use describing words. Do you like writing? I think writing is fun. You make the story and I think that is cool. What do you think?

    From Corianna

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.