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Tuesday 2 June 2015

planet eleven running


planet eleven running   one day i landed on a planet they were all runinng but from nothing so i tryed to help them stop but they would not so i let them run suddenly harry screamed ounch! And he tryed to run but he could not run so i looked at his foot and i saw a thorn  it was deeply in his foot i tryed to pull it out but it did not work then he started to cry and he said i want to run but i can,t because of this thorn and he cryed some more so i said i would help him  he started to be happy again so i helped him walk over to a safe spot and sit down we tryed to pull it out but we could not so i tryed harder and harder and finely i got it out. and we where both happy and he said to me “thanks you for helping me” i said your welcome and he said to me “ i will be carefuler now and look where im going” so he did and he was happy.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Anna what a great story i love it you make me feel like i will keep running from nothing i love it what a great read

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