Winter wonder land

WALT: Add detail to my writing.

SC: Include at least 5 icons from the ‘Adding Detail’ chart.

SC: Include at least two similes or metapores.

• You are the character in the picture. Write a list of descriptive words you might use in your description before you start….

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plan! i can see the snowflakes breaking of the branches and falling to the ground .

i woke up on a cold winters morning and looked out the window there was snow everywhere. So i put on some wooly clothes and headed to the forest.

i was walking and then i saw big trees they were covered in snow so i walked off into the distance and the heavy snow made the trees bend over and  cover the sun light i walked on and felt the snow crunching  under my feet i heard the wind blowing in my ear & i see the snow falling onto the ground.

it is cold and miserable so i kept walking. & i saw snow starting to form into ice it was amazing  it was the best day ever on winter so i carried on walking and looking every minute as i walked i tripped on something but when i looked back there was nothing there just snow i started to get creeped out so i went back home and had a nice hot chocolate with Lara & Katelynn.

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